Thursday, October 20, 2016

Response to Post 1

Growing up as the oldest can make it difficult to find a good, relatable role model or hero.  Fortunately, my cousin Chris has been someone who I have been able to look up to.  No matter the situation he always sets a good example.  Through various troubling times of family adversity, he displayed courage and unselfishness to make the best of a bad situation.  He has translated these leadership qualities to his work ethic.  Throughout college he was apart of many entrepreneurial ventures and brought success to each one.  He stepped up during crucial times of misfortune when others would give up and would not rest until each of these ventures were on a path to success.  His motivation to not let difficulty get in his way, no matter the circumstance, has shown me that he is a true hero.

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  1. What has Chris inspired you to do in the future/ will you take up entrepreneurial ventures like him?

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  2. What has Chris inspired you to do in the future/ will you take up entrepreneurial ventures like him?

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  3. Do you remember any specific moments that your brother taught you?

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  4. Thanks for sharing this. You could really strengthen this post with less general statements like "troubling times" and "displayed courage" and "times of misfortune." The reader cannot "see" what's behind these statements unless you tell them. If we don't know, we can't understand where you're admiration for your cousin is coming from.

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